Missing points

With you words that form phrases and sentences go unquoted just like a newborn babe is not borne with a dress on or a seed does not carry with it a fertilizer With you words are just that fresh and new and withering just like a book thats never opened or a door thats never closed or a slipper kept inside a closet A writer once said he never uses punctuations to let his readers catch their own breath and I thought you take my breath away But then the chase is never ending circling around like a roller coaster that my breath almost ends itself in utter lost of air